Enter if you Dare! by X.S
The Darkness of the night, brings terror and fright,you try not to get scared as you read the sign saying beware, but into the belly of the beast you continue to linger on nto the night where in the darkness, you're gone
When you first linger onward, you should be just fine untl a demonic hand grabs your shoulder from behind
you make a shriek and begin to flee but no human can escape their destiny.
Creeps and ghouls surround you
from all around
from land,air,
and even the ground
There's no way out, you're cornered in
as their feast s about to begin
you open your eyes and see heaven's gate
as the monsters consume you and seal your fate!
When you first linger onward, you should be just fine untl a demonic hand grabs your shoulder from behind
you make a shriek and begin to flee but no human can escape their destiny.
Creeps and ghouls surround you
from all around
from land,air,
and even the ground
There's no way out, you're cornered in
as their feast s about to begin
you open your eyes and see heaven's gate
as the monsters consume you and seal your fate!
7 Comments:
i liked the words used. it was heavily portrayed. i'm not enitrely sure why you didn't cut the lines up in the beginning like you did in the end, that would have helped me a little, but other than that it was really good.
The descriptions were captivating! I like how it incorporated halloween with ghouls and creeps and being scared. Also, I like how the ending was dramatic!!!
the words you used were good, and overall the entire thing was good and i enjoyed reading it.
it was an entertaining read and the words worked in the poem perfectly. good job :]
it was an entertaining read and the words worked in the poem perfectly. good job :]
I also enjoyed the description employed in this poem. It was festive and quite entrancing.
I like the demonic part you used the sensory details well
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